I am a Year 6 student at Kaikohe West School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mrs Wallace.
I like the way that you had great positive belief in making sure that we shouldn't have smoking in our community. I also agree to your three reasons!
WOW Naidene! I love when you told me your three great reasons of why smoking should be banned. Next time you should try using colours that will match. Any how I still LOVE it. It is the best writing I have EVER READ!!!
Hey Naiden. I like the way you have good reasons why smoking should be band. I also I like your'e speech. I like your speech because it has nice reasons and it has what it would cause if you smoke.
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Hi Naidene my name is Keanu I love your speech its wonderful and perfect I think smoking should be band as well because some people walk past and smoke blows in their face and they start coughing and start getting sick and that's why I think smoking should be band.