Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Popping candy!

Popping candy
WALT: Describe our senses.
I smell grapes and candy floss. The smell is delicious.
I see little Rocks. The sight is Sparkly crystals.
I feel rocky pieces. The touch is crushed up stones.
I hear popping in my mouth. The sound is loud explosions.
I taste lollipops. The taste is delightful.

1 comment:

  1. i like your poem but can you use more discritve words

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